Clusty [APPROVED]

Name: Clusty
Race: Gem
If Gem, Type of Gem: Cluster gem
Age: Unknown
Affiliation: none atm
Appearance: 

Spoiler:

Personality: She's surprisingly stable for someone that's a combination of gem shards (though as of now it's unclear). She has some traits of the two or three gem shards that made her, but is otherwise has her own.

She's a rather sweet if shy and nervous gem. Despite being a fusion (technically), she has issues with being alone due to being alone for most of her time being awake. She cares for the well being of living creatures, and doesn't judge due to looks.

She has some desires to be whole like all cluster gems, as well be a simple normal gem. she has issues with her own existence because once she discovered she had been made via the shards of dead gems, she felt like a monster that shouldn't exist because she's a mistake that didn't need to be made, despite not wanting this existence. 

She's rather childish despite most likely being older than most children and hides most of her insecurities at out of fear of burdening them even more than she felt that already does. That, and she felt others are far more important than her, even prior to the discovery of what her kind is made out of.

History: In the war, her two gems were shattered. once found, they were combined into her. However, due to shards not being the complete gems, it left her not as "perfect" as other gems. 

Her eyes weren't developed as well (making things looked like a blur distorted image), she has a smaller child-like body, some body horror/mis-matched colors still happens, and she's not as strong and powerful. 

She was one of the cluster experiments on earth, and one of the few that grew more than a simple torture existence. She activated sometime prior to Peridot entering the kindergatern herself (physically anyway). It was completely abandoned, so she was all alone with no idea who she was. 

She eventually got a bit lonely and bored exploring her kindergatern, so she left. She spent some time mainly exploring the beach city area, drifting along from place to place.

she grew to appreciate the beauty of things, slowly learning about how things work around earth. However, all she wanted was a friend. Some people were weary of her, so she was kind of there.

that is, until she ran into the crystal gems. Steven eventually befriended her, and she learned about who she is. ... she didn't take it well. 

Fusions: n/a, unknown if she can fused.
Gem Weapon: a swiss army knife that can transform/summon various weapons
Gem Special Abilities: average gem abilities (tho not as strong and powerful as other), communication with gem shards/cluster gems (including her own, though when she's asleep), enhanced senses (sans sight, her eyes have some issues that things a bit warped looking)

***Making a note that I have seen this and will review as soon as I can.

Hello!

So there are just a few things that I would like to see expanded on in the profile. I will list them below and then when you are finished reworking what I've mentioned go ahead and post here that you have finished and I will take another look at it!

Ok so this is completely up to you since you posted this profile before I realized this, but it dawned on me that it might be helpful for me and for the person posting the profile if there was an area to write out character's history. Since you had this profile up before I made that change I will give you the choice, although I would highly recommend it as it would probably answer some of my questions and give you a place to expand on your OC some more! But like I said, the choice is yours!

So here are the things I would like to see reworked a little. Do your best to expand your profile and answer any questions I might have!

It this OC based on the Cluster gem in the Canon show? Or is it a completely new cluster? If it's new, how did they become a cluster? Did they incubate within a planet like the cluster in the show? Were they formed on Homeworld? (These questions would best be answered in the History section but if you choose not to add that then just expand on them in the Personality area!)

Further explain the first bit of her personality. What personality traits did she inherit from some of the Gem shards? What personality traits are completely her own?

It she childish because she is young for a Gem? Or is she childish because of the fact that she is a cluster and doesn't have the normal mental maturity of a normally formed Gem? Either one works but if she is childish because she doesn't have the same mental maturity as normal Gems it could effect how she interacts with other Gems, other than just being young and inexperienced.

Why does she feel others are more important than her? Is it because of the fact that she is a Cluster Gem? I want you to dig deep into her feelings and really show me her emotions. It must be hard being a cluster, having all those lingering emotions from the other gems inside her, and I want you to explain to me just how difficult that is for her.

Why aren't her average Gem abilities as powerful as normal Gems?

Why are her eyes not enhanced like the rest of her senses? Was there and accident? Was she born that way? To what extent do her eyes "warp" things?


The suggestions and questions I have posted should be used as a guide to what I can see needs a little more detail. Just try your best to expand on the areas that I touched on!

I look forward to reviewing your profile again once the changes have been made!

oh, alright. sorry.

I'm not good at coming up with details on the fly ^^;. Or discribing things.

It's alright! Take your time there's no due date on these Take as much time as you need to rework things and just let me know when your finished

If you need help brainstorming, feel free to PM me and I'd be more than happy to help you out

Alright it looks like you added a lot and answered most of my questions so I'm going to stamp this as approved! I will also add it to the title of your profile for future reference! ^^