aqua aura [APPROVED]

Name: aqua aura
Race: gem
If Gem, Type of Gem: aqua aura
Age: approximately 500 years older then
Affiliation: crystal gems

Appearance:

gem pic:

height compared to normal quartz height :

new art made by JonEplies:

Personality: she has almost unbreakable focus for the task at hand (like   when she got hooked on that game in the arcade)a warm hearted and kind gem and does everything in her power to help those in need, very poetic, is very social even towards the humens and is also very curious about technology even though she isn't very good at handling it to the point where it breaks

History: she was made in secret by rose(in order for none of the homeworlders to find out she exists ) to combat the diamonds and after the death of pink diamond was bubbled by rose when rose saw the consequences of aqua auras power and at some point a human accidentally broke her free and went back to the crystal gems a fight almost broke out but garnet whom had seen it all coming stopped them and was surprised about seeing the appearance of rose but though her telepathy found out that "rose" had no recollection of her and started calling him Steven  

(The following area only applies to Gem characters. If you are posting a Bio for a human or non-Gem character, you can delete this part.)

Gem Weapon: a huge clever so big even my oc has to use two hands
fusion: none yet
Gem Special Abilities: hydrokinesis(just about the same level as lapis unless she is in water "form" where she has complete control over all water as she becomes the water this is the power that defeated pink diamond and does usually never use this power as it has serious consequences to the world around her do mind that it does'int  mean she is not willing to transform just that she would not "fuse" with too much water from outside sources ), turning into water and telepathy

Hello!

So what exactly do you need help with? I see you have a pretty good start here already

Also, my apologies it took me so long to respond. I didn't see the change in your profile title

the thing is i think there should be more personality and history but i cant figure out what to write

Ok well for personality what I usually do is google personality traits and then basically just go through them and pick the traits I think would fit my character the best. Try and think of how your character would react to certain situations. If confronted, which instinct would kick in, fight or flight? Is she emotional? Does she make friends easily? Just question everything about her and see what pops into your head

As for history, how bout I ask some prompt questions? You don't have to answer them specifically but try and think of your responses and apply them to her history and how thing all fit together.

Why was she made in secret? Why didnt Rose want the others to know about her? Is she dangerous? If she can combat the Diamonds she must have enormous power. Is it all brute force or is she clever? How strong is her Hydrokinesis compared to Lapis? Why did Rose bubble her after the Pink Diamond was shattered? Did she not need her anymore? Or was she afraid of how she would act around the other CGs? How did a human set her free? Was it an accident or on purpose? What was her reaction to the new Earth and the remaining crystal Gems? What were the CGs reactions to her? Did a fight break out? How does she feel about Steven ones she figures out he has Roses gem? Does she understand that Steven is different from Rose or does she call him by Rose like Jasper and Bismuth?

Like I said you don't have to answer all those but just think about your answers and try and incorporate some of it into your history.

And also, even if she doesn't have any fusions, can you add the fusion section back to her profile? It should go right above Gem Weapon. If she doesn't have any fusions just say "none".

I hope this helps you! If you have any other questions don't hesitate to ask

i think im done lapis and im somewhat satisfied with how this turned out

bump

My apologies for the delay In reviewing this ^^;;

The only thing that I would like to see expanding on is her personality. It doesn't have to be elaborate but just give us some more personality traits so that we know what kind of behavior to expect from her!

Once you've done that she will be good to go!

EDIT: Also, could you also R&U in the RP Rules thread? Just so that I know you have read through and will comply with our rules! ^^

can you give me a link?

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Thank you for the additions! I think that's looks pretty good so I'm gonna stamp this as approved! I'm so sorry again for the delays I've been so busy! Lol

I'll be changing the title of your profile to Approved for future reference

Also, here's the link to the RP Rules! Just post R&U after you've read through them and you'll be good to go!

https://crystalgemuniverse.forummotion.com/t170-crystal-gem-universe-rp-rules